Bang! Bang!

Jan. 3rd, 2006 08:00 pm
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Bang! Bang!

The terrorist attacks of irregular frequency at our place started on the Independence Day of 2005. Those "attacks" were inspiring enought to plan a short film based on the events. (Plan is in my head, where else.) Inspiration hit a high when the leader of terrorists (eyewitnesses say that they often have a strength of two), greeted a happy new year on Sunday morning.

Here is an outline of the screenplay that never was, in pictures.

***

Kill Sajith Vol 1.

SCENE ONE.

Flashback in B&W.

On August 15

Aditi showed up at our place for the first time on last August 15. The date was easy to remember since it was a Monday and a holiday. (Holidays we love, don't we?)

You gonna shoot me?

Rafeeq had a hard time chasing with the camera. She wouldn't stay still for more than two straight seconds, but he finally managed to take some wonderful pictures.

I'm impervious to cameras!

Soon, shyly, timidly, Aditi's younger sibling followed her. While Aditi is the kind of lady that can enter any room and totally own the place, "Shideesh" is a shy, self-effacing, mild-mannered young man who manages to simply pass a smile.

Hi. Anyone home?

Aditi quickly got hold of the digital camera that was with me and took this picture of our guy - look at the brilliant execution of the classical rule of the thirds!

SCENE TWO.

Jump cut to present.

Aditi shows up with a gun. She is even willing to pose for a picture, which was surprising. Surprise went away when she grabbed the camera from me and the shutter went "kichaak!", "kichaak!", "kichaak!"

A neighbour's car was framed, with flash and all, before I knew it.

Kichaak, kichaaak, kichaaak, went the camera.

But I'd got hold of her gun by this time. Gently I got the camera back, pointed the gun at her and said, "bang! bang!"

She became very angry at this turn of events, hit me with the hand in bandage, gave a firm scratch on the neck which left a mild trail of blood, and stomped away back to home, not minding her mom who was watching the funny show.

Aditi's mom smiled.

I smiled too.

***

(Scene two happened in early November - Aditi got her hand in sling when she fell down in a park. She's completely okay now, bandage removed and all, allowing nothing to affect her spirit.)

Theme????

Date: 2006-01-04 04:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] achint8112.livejournal.com
Hi basically a gud theme but the headline not taht catchy as the one u posted ..."fanatic shoots miscrosoft employee or " i don remember clearly sumthing of this sort....
I feel the content cud have been even better ( relative to ur caliber)..hope thats coming in Volume II..all the best

Re: Theme????

Date: 2006-01-04 05:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sajith.livejournal.com
Yes, content could have been better. I should probably have waited till something better developed in my head. Actually, I wrote a little crap (800+ words, I think) this Sunday and trashed all that on Monday.

And I simply didn't have the patience or time this time.

First intention was to mimic Tarantino's orignal script at a few places but alas... I can be really disgusting even to myself. Know your limitations and all that, you know ;)

Thanks for being so forthright. I expect even more blunt words.

Re: Theme????

Date: 2006-01-04 06:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] achint8112.livejournal.com
Hey I just wrote what I felt ….actually I look forward to these interesting posts ..have told Maxaud also that he and his frens have excellent vocab. so was slightly disappointed with this ..thats ok just waiting now for some really good posts from u :- )

Re: Theme????

Date: 2006-01-04 06:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sajith.livejournal.com
Yes, just write what you feel :) But I don't think I will be exercising any vocabulary muscles here ;)

Re: Theme????

Date: 2006-01-04 06:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] achint8112.livejournal.com
hey u are not expected to do that dear ...at times i just feel that get too defensive

Date: 2006-01-04 05:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] indumol.livejournal.com
That's Aditi right? Nice!

Date: 2006-01-04 05:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] indumol.livejournal.com
I had not read your script then but I remember her from rafeeq's post

Date: 2006-01-04 05:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sajith.livejournal.com
Hope you said "that was a great script" after reading it! :-P

Date: 2006-01-04 05:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] indumol.livejournal.com
That was great script. :) Aditi looks like a lot of fun! :)

Date: 2006-01-04 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sajith.livejournal.com
It isn't that good Indu... probably I should have allowed this a little more, uh, you know, "gestation period" to develop into something a little more readable.

Indeed, she's a lot of fun. Her folks got so excited on receiving the pictures that they too want to take up photography ;)

Date: 2006-01-04 07:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] indumol.livejournal.com
That's good, your pics of her are really good.

Date: 2006-01-04 08:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sajith.livejournal.com
Thanks, yo.

Date: 2006-01-04 05:56 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I remember reading a post about her...I liked the new picture...good way to start 06!

- Saj

Date: 2006-01-04 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sajith.livejournal.com
Yup. Bang! Bang! :)

Is is Sajith Part II?

Date: 2006-01-04 06:10 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
??

Re: Is is Sajith Part II?

Date: 2006-01-04 08:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sajith.livejournal.com
Yes, kind of :D

(But who is this Anonymous Wizard?)

Re: Is is Sajith Part II?

Date: 2006-01-04 09:29 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
So its Sajith Vijayan..y do ppl feel ashamed of writing their own name. Take our TLW –Rafeeq’s case also here its understandable to avoid confusion maybe maybe not -----anonymous wizard from XMEC

Re: Is is Sajith Part II?

Date: 2006-01-04 09:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sajith.livejournal.com
It isn't Sajith Vijayan.

Yeah, why do people do thusly? :-P
Who is TLW-Rafeeq?

Re: Is is Sajith Part II?

Date: 2006-01-04 10:07 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I thought as usual The Lost Wanderer would be our guitarist Rafeeq
Any contacts with sajith vijayan

Date: 2006-01-04 07:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zeeshanmn.livejournal.com
Damn, where is the script? :-0

Nicely summed up, Aditi is good! I remember Chottu from one of my posts.

Date: 2006-01-04 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sajith.livejournal.com
There's no script Zeeshan. It is only an outline of a script that never was ;)

And thanks! In fact she reminds me of my sister when she was Aditi's age.

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